i think the vocals/choir fits pretty well actually. there doesn't seem to be anything "wrong". there are a few conflicting frequencies with the different basses, but i'm also listening to this with ear buds <_<. the percussion sounds pretty good. i wouldn't remove any of it, but tweaking them a bit wouldn't hurt. as far as "empty" goes, it sounds pretty full, you have a strong bass percussion pushing the track forward, with some mid and high percussion here and there. around 2:50 i kinda felt like the orchestra should have been a bit softer, but that's just me. anyways, that's all i got, take from it what you feel like would work, i'm not huge into the whole composing orchestra thing so idk much about this genre. <_<
you can really feel the emotion in this. this is fucking beautiful.
this isn't bad for your first fls song. i don't think it would be trance, but then again who really cares. it's kinda repetitively random. by that i mean the percussion is all the same with little to no dynamics (loud/soft hits), the same goes for the synth/instrument used. maybe putting a break in the song somewhere would help some of the repetition. I noticed there was a slight change around halfway through when the synth dropped to a lower octave and then it went right back to where it was. of course, i'm assuming you have little knowledge of fls since this is your first song. i'm actually looking forward to seeing how well you grow into an electronic music producer. you have a lot of potential if you keep working hard on your music.
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