you can really feel the emotion in this. this is fucking beautiful.

this isn't bad for your first fls song. i don't think it would be trance, but then again who really cares. it's kinda repetitively random. by that i mean the percussion is all the same with little to no dynamics (loud/soft hits), the same goes for the synth/instrument used. maybe putting a break in the song somewhere would help some of the repetition. I noticed there was a slight change around halfway through when the synth dropped to a lower octave and then it went right back to where it was. of course, i'm assuming you have little knowledge of fls since this is your first song. i'm actually looking forward to seeing how well you grow into an electronic music producer. you have a lot of potential if you keep working hard on your music.

this isn't too bad actually. the effects are very interesting and fit well with the sounds. but i feel like the main synth or whatever could be stronger and bolder. overall it's pretty well put together considering the effects you were using for your sounds.