i wouldn't get all too into describing the genre of this piece. who cares? it's music.
but i really like this song. for sure. the drop is awesome and pretty much perfect. the white noise is pretty good too. of course the percussion could be slightly louder (mostly the kick), but you can still hear it and i'm the type that likes a hard hitting kick that makes your ears twitch a little. if this had that short hard kick, oh man, it would be hella sick. awesome job so far for sure.
Thx for the feedback :D.
Wow you have no idea how happy I am with that you liked the drop :D. Been working on it alot and I absolutely understand what you mean about the kick. I also like a "slam" kick in my ears X3.
Was a bit hesistant to make the kick louder but I'll try boosting it up now :).
Again thx for the feedback :D.
i really like the melody. no complaint there. i think the percussion could use a slight makeover. possibly something a bit louder and "tighter". but other than that it's pretty rad.
the reverb is spot on. it even works really well with your sounds. for just learning how to master, this is pretty good, very good actually. not too much and not too less of anything really. i could easily listen to this at max volume and not want to rip my ears off. if i could give this 6 stars i would. awesome song.
i understand that the out of tune-ness was intentional, but it just doesn't work with this kind of song. other than the out of tune parts, it sounds pretty good. the clashing notes are just bad for the ears... that's my only complaint.
writer's block? it seems pretty good to me. it may just be me, but the bass is kinda distracting around 1:30, but when the drums kick in, it's fine. the change in distortion gives the song some color. pretty good song for sure.
the pads are pretty flawless. i feel like the drums should be a bit louder, or heavier. overall, this pretty rad. this is one of those songs where it's hard to point out what needs improvement because so much "personality" and personal style went into this, imo. but seriously though, i dig this shit out of this.
Thanks so much.
Yep, I definitely agree about the drums. I was actually having some trouble EQing, so...I ended up with this. Not bad, but not the best it can be.
the only problem i have with this is it's way too repetitive. you could possibly break up the repetition with a break or something. it's just missing a transition or two. the intro could use something to help push you into the song. like a slight increase in volume or something. around 1:32 you kinda do a build up but there isn't any noticeable change. and the ending really drove me crazy with the clashing notes. it may have been done on purpose to give it some kinda of character, but it just doesn't sound "right". this has potential to be really really catchy, you just gotta break it up into sections and have changes in repetition and dynamics. that's just my opinion. take it with a grain of salt.
You're right about everything, im still experimenting in fl studio & am learning new things, and i made this when i first started using FL studio aswell, thank you for the feedback though :)
this is very satisfying to the ear. very nicely written.
Thanks very much deadbea7. It was my quick piano song btw. :)
edited : Why I said tanks? *facepalm*
interesting change in mood from the original. it would be gnarly if you somehow mixed the previous with this one as a whole track. just a thought.
i like how deep this is. it's dark and mellow. it's kinda melancholy actually.
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